Картинка как-то не ловится взглядом, сначала блуждаешь по изображению, а только потом всë становится "на свои места". Может быть сделать широкую чëрную рамку?
I like very much the cinematic use of the form...like Bergman in Persona or The Face, and i love the near abstraction the form takes in the two women in opposition...and the movement from gray scale to black to weight the abstract composition...absolutely intriguing and suggestive nude photograph. I think here, sharpness (not necessarily focus) could be improved to bring out the specific forms and to enhance the light, which is essential to this format...but, it is still very very interesting work. :)